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Re: deleted
To start with, I really liked your poem because the lines are simple and straight forward... The message is nice... I'm tired of the same old days The same old ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: deleted
I really liked the theme of the poem... :) The lines are also nice... :) The lines that I loved the best are: "That your face is a canvas And ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Self portrait (Now completed!)
cool...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: One and One Make Two.
I liked it... It's nice... And I could get what you wanted to say... Overall, a nice piece... :)
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: What is Love?
It's nice... :)
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: Ode to Young Writers Society
I liked the poem... :) It's different and cool... :)
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: The Huge Claw
it seems interesting... :) i'd like to read more... :)
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: The Silent Laughter
I liked it ... Actually, sometimes I like straight forward language... This was touching... :)
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: A fake phase
I could imagine a tune in my head and it sounded good... I'd like to listen to it...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: See Me
I liked the lyrics, but some more lines would have taken the song to some other level... Anyway, I liked reading this... :)
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Dead Summer
I liked your song... :) It has a nice ring to it... :)
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: The Life Of A Writer
I like randomness... So I'd say I loved it... :D Would love to watch it live... :) And yeah, this part was really crazy, but I found it hilarious: Writer's ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Beneath this smile
Deep inside me, There’s this unspoken feeling, Seems like I’m sinking Under the pressure Of being good enough. Deep inside me, There’s this unspoken sadness. The thought of being a ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Running With Music
Wow... I really loved it... I've the same thoughts, actually... I loved the lines: Thrumming, tapping, the music starts to come. Spinning, falling, tugging at my heart and soul. I ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: deleted
I liked the message of the poem... :)
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