Pozoe12

great job! i thought this was a pretty good short story and it would be awesome if you kept writing! i could kind of sort of see that it was ...

part two of my story :D Two: Jamie I pressed into him, my face in his chest, breathing in his scent. His scent reminded me of a cabin in the ...

i thought it was pretty good! it was interesting and you did a good job showing Ally's transition from her sister's best friend to worst enemy. however, in the beginning, ...

okay, i hope im not repeating anything that other people said. i probably will though, so sorry in advance. :smt001 okay i only really saw one typo there, and that ...

i've been reading these stories, and i think they're great! but, i have to say i think this one went a little too fast. it was a little rushed. you ...

well, alright. i guess i was in one of those moods. seriously, guys, this isn't normally what i write but i keep writing when i'm in one of these moods ...

that was a pretty good story. I liked how there was this whole conflict going on in the main character, how she wanted to love James but at the same ...

this was a great story. i'm intrigued now! hope you continue this i think a lot of other people agree 8) :wink:

where's the story? what happened to it, i can't view it.

its great but i think its got some work. like your second reviewer, i'd like to know more about the relationship between kira and justin. is their banter about being ...

wow i liked this one. i can kind of relate to some of this and i loved the ending hah

:? 8) :lol: ohk, im really scared about getting mixed reviews about this one, but its what i needed 2 write, so if u dont like it, sorry. btw, im ...

:D :shock: :( 8) just an idea that came to me, like all of my stories, lol. enjoy, and plz review if you can! it's kind of short, so yea. ...

luv it. can't wait 4 the rest....if ur posting more. haha i read chapters 1-6 n i still feel like it wasnt enough ugh! well anyways, awesome job, let me ...

hey, this is definitely not a failed piece! i saw what u wrote on one of ur other stories, n that's not true! i loved it. u described the characters ...