PotterGeek101

I absolutely loved this so discriptive and full of power and emotion it's really good! It kept me going right until then end but just need to work on a ...

i absolutely loved this! so descriptive and full of tiny detail to drag and pull the reader in. i thought it was perfect it captured the reader well and held ...

i don't really understand it that well But i'm sure when you get started into your novel it will make much more sense. All i can say is to over ...

Ah banned because your not fully watching lord of the rings if your on here too!

oh shoot! and ban for saying HA in caplocks!

I absolutely love this it's grasps the reader perfectly and holds them there till the every end. But there are a few mistakes that we can easily work on. So ...

This is my first little piece of work on here, please review so i know how i can do better :D My hands felt like bitter frost had attacked them. ...

oo i like it so far it sounds quite ... depressing ... but still good and i think you should carry on and have a repetition in it like the ...

pottetgeek101 :D meant to be pottergeek101

banned for not knowing weather disexcept is a word :L

i ban you for excepting my point ...

I ban you for YOU not doing anything about it also i have to agree he is lush!

Banned because your picture is covering Orlando's face!! :shock: shock horror!! :D

banned because your frog is wearing no shoes! :D

Green, Ed Sheeran, How i met your mother??