Poseidon

Hey Thanks everyone who reviewed. I didn't edit this one and since this is my first publishing I wanted to get it out there. The second chapter everything will be ...

Thank you

Thanks ill work on that next time

Really!? That's amazing. And Your Welcome

I can tell you edited. Your Grammer is great. I love how you switch narraraters so smoothly. This is my first work ive read but it seemed like I read ...

Hi Noelle. I'm new so bare with me. I really like your stories so far. You do a wonderful job at your character development. Zeke is something else. Well keep ...