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Poseidon

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Historical Fiction Re: The Battle. Chapter 1.

    Hi. Your stories has a good plot but you are moving it along way to fast. You also need to explain more. There are a lot of I in your ...

    Jun 10, 2014


I went to confront noisy neighbours, only to find the windows dark, stuck with two notes. The ghost, too, had "gone fishing". Something still whistled.
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