Poltergiest

Really amazing. It actually had me holding my breath, kinda... But really, I would liek to read the rest, even though yoy probably already posted it and I just haven't ...

He could hear the waves crashing gently against the rock below and gazed at the moon. Khor glanced over at the town off the coast off the mainland. He saw ...

Yessss!!! Sorry, I just really like this story. Anyway... I thought the relation between Halee and Fin was interesting, definatly want to know more. I didn't really understand how he ...

*Finishes digesting cheesy begal* "Mmm..." *Steps away silently* :) ~Pol

~Chapter Three~ Attack  Khor woke up earlier than usual and took a shower. When he was done he changed into his robes. They were freshly washed and felt crisp ...

well... Shadow sun basicly took the whole story and... umm... never mind. But, tis good. :wink: *whispers* I'm back. :twisted: te he ~Pol

Well, at the begining I was really confused with time set and charaters. But as I read on, It became clearer who was who and who hated who. :D Its ...

Ok, here it goes... It was really well done! I like how you refered to the "Electric things". Made me feel so technilogical. :wink: I like the Half-Demon Prince and ...

That was hilarious!! I love dugger! It was well done and now I wish I knew what happens. I am wondering why you posted it in Si-Fi, it didn't seem ...

~Chapter Two~ Knall  Black smoke loomed over the ashy landscape. Ah! What a beautiful morning! The Crimson volcano was like an ink blot on the reflective black mountains. The ...

Woa... Seriously. That was amazing. You wrote with, and this is gonna sound wierd, but you wrote with such passion. You made it beautiful. And silent. I don't really know ...

:shock: Oh my dear goodness me. I am completely obsesed with this tory now. I honestly don't know what it is. You grip the reader and make them hold on. ...

Awsome awsome awsome story! Just a few things... First, I was really confused at first. In the begining I thought this story was from the perspective of a bird. :? ...

Really awsome story... Ok, here goes... First of all, I think the other camp kids are really- I mean really mean. First of all, why are they tormenting this nice ...

I agree. CAKE!! BLUE!!! STAR!!! I know its seems like nothing but I got my first star not to long ago. See, now that seems like nothing. Sorry, I need ...