Poltergiest

First of all, :cry: . I feel so bad for poor Brad. (Ryhm not intended). It was so uncool of his friends to totally abandon him like that. Oh well, ...

Ok, I have to get this out, who is this Pat guy? ~Pol

Horay! I'm off grounding! Horay! YWS is back up! Horay! I read your story! Horay! Ok, sorry to say but this is the first I've read of your story execpt ...

:shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: Ok, I'll abmit it, I didn't read it. :cry: Ok I Have to tell you. Theres such a thing as paragraphs. Not ...

Throws confetti and bows before NAte the all powerful. Thank you so freakin much! I was grounded most of the time it was down but now I'm back on! THank ...

Knall was running as fast as he could towards a nearby bush. He dove into it and let his antenna poke out of the bush to sense his surroundings. The ...

Really good. An original idea, I think. Anyway, I want to know more about what they are. Try and find another word instead of creatures. Like... Well... Just say what ...

Khor woke up with tears on his face. He lay curled in the remnants of one of the buildings in the city of Hyresh. The entire city was left in ...

pretty flowers. :shock: *inhales deeply and lazily holds up a 7 card*

Um uh well... *Splutters indescibebly and blushes* :oops: I honostly have no idea. I've read, like a thousand books. Well um... Probably either Sabriel by Garth Nix, The Artemes Fowl ...

I haven't read any of your other stuff but this was really good. I was a bit confused but that kinda comes when you start reading the end of a ...

~Chapter Four~ Seize  The sound of marching feet continued to grow louder and louder until Khor could see the lifeless eyes of the Shades. They marched in perfect unison ...

That last part was pretty freakin sudden! But it was still pretty cool. I like Ghent, even though he is kindof a jerk. I was gonna say a different word ...

Oh man... That short really made me feel empty. Which is a good thing for me. It really moved me, the agony na dhow you described everything so well. Yea... ...

Na! I freaked out when I tapped, Visit posts since last visit. Not blaming anyone just... Irronic that this happened nearly directly after Nate left. Hm... Acident or purposful... Acident ...