Poltergiest

There, I read it, now I'm criting. See!!! Anyway, It was good. I like how you explained about the branch thing and the large pockets. Thank you. I thought it ...

Even as Khor thought this he noticed that the other dead-things were starting to crawl back out of the shops and homes. With one last look at the gigantic dead, ...

Megaman with hiar. Hm... Uh, 6/10 i guess. ~Pol

*Gasps* So do I. I even like dragons who eat dougnuts. *Snigers* Hope you like YWS, I do. I f you need anything, PM. Even though everyone says that and ...

Thanx everyone for the great crits. I will write more soon and if theres and anomunus vote I'll post the next today. Thanx again! ~Pol

Okay, now I feel bad for not reading it before. I'm gonna try and crit but there wasn't really anything. First, shouldn't it be in fnafiction? Just a thought, anyway... ...

*~*~* Khor had been visiting the city called Cyte for many days now. He could now easily navigate a few of the more common streets. Khor couldn’t help but notice ...

RRRRAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!! I love this story, and for no aperent reason. Your gonna have to get this thing published or else. But not really, yes publish but not the threat. Oh, ...

I saw your story and had to crit. *Hooray, your back* Huh, unusually phyced about that. Hmm... Well, it was short but sweet. I missed out on a few and ...

Hello and welcome n'stuff! Hope you get to lovve this site as much as I do. Anyway. Everyone says "PM me" and I mean it too but its so unoriginal. ...

Jerak turned, staring through the intense light of the lava boiling so far below. There he saw him. He was standing only a few yards away. At last. He thought. ...

~*~*~ For the past few weeks Knall had been watching over the tiny egg. Making sure it was warm enough and making sure no other creatures got to it or ...

First of all I thought it was really well done. I liked the short scene with the spirit and Brad. The only thing is I imagined the mist being thick ...

i would usually pick paperback over harback but now that its summer I don't have to go to school, so bring on the hardback! :D ~Pol

~Chapter Five~ Tied to Darkness  Inside the shop Khor saw a large variety of weapons. There were also many people wandering around, looking at some of the stranger wea