Poltergiest

The only reason why I chose HArry is cause I've never heard of the others. Sorry! ~Pol

I've already read it but I still like it. Tis good! ~Pol

It was really good. I like how they still managed to decieve deLucio even though they were lying. ONe thing, I get Shyzel have different clans and whatnot but explian ...

Well, do you? ~Pol

~*~*~ Knall’s head was swimming. He was lying on a cold, metal floor and he was on his back. He rolled over unto his belly and stood. He stretched and ...

Oh well. Its still fun to post on this thingie. ~Pol

4/10 Its okay, I didn't really like it... ~Pol

It was good. Better than the first draft, at least. I like how you told about the past of both of them at first. Ghent was cool. Hm... Triangles. Anyway. ...

*~*~* Khor heard crashes and bangs coming from somewhere in the darkness. He stood and looked down the dark hall. There was clashing. It felt like hatred was flowing down ...

9/10 funny and I know where its from. :P ~Pol

Who was that masked man! Nice intro, just like the wierd cat siad above me. K, you've got a cool avatar. Everything a newbie needs. Can't wiat to see you ...

HA! Current situation! -Khor Well, I've been kicked out of my clan and been disgraced as a Shade so... No I'm not very content. -Knall Things could be going better. ...

It was pretty good. I like the whole hacking wizards thing, it was new. I think it drew back to a Harry Potter thing every now and then but I ...

Hiya, I haven't really read very much of your stuff but I've felt the same way. When I first started to write my story, I'll admit it, I really sucked. ...

Footwear? Boots, boots and more boots.-Khor Barefooted. I have really big claws though... Need to be clipped.-Knall There are more important things in the world than shoes.-Vathen Whats your favorite ...