Poltergiest

huh! The lines were faint and there was a kinda smdge on his right cheek but I liked it otherwise. The hair matched and you could almost see Orlando Bloom! ...

Uh, really sorry but I'll have to disagree... (Please don't hurt me) I draw... I need to stop saying that... Um, I kinda thought it was porportioned badly, his face ...

Really good. Its clear n'stuff. (I draw alot... Anyway...) I thought the thumb was a bit lond but stubby. The arm itself near the end was a little bumpy. Other ...

~*~*~ It was night, the moon shining and lighting up the empty streets. Khor was crouching behind a dumpster, across the street from The Dragons Wing. The dark green rusty ...

Pat looks... Um, old... ~Pol~

Hello! *Waves* We already know eahco ther. (Kinda) So I'll just say hi anyways. :roll: ~Pol~

Shabam! This thread is here just so people can post here to aviod boredom so... Be random! :roll: ~Pol~

"Um... Ten years?" -Khor "Really big bat wings... And no more mountians..." -Knall *Remians silent* -Vathen ~Pol~

10/10 That is the best one I've seen since I've gotten on here! :smt091 ~Pol~

The fishr guy didn't give me a rating... *Sniff* 7/10 ~Pol~

"There is no question!" -Khor "You really should post a question before excpecting an answer." -Knall "...I don't have time for idiotic mind games..." -Vathen Would you rather be able ...

I lied it way more than I thought I would. Uh, first of all, check grammar and whatnot. Theres a spell check button at the bottom and just use taht ...

9/10 :D I like it. :D ~Pol~

To: Joeducttape. Its from Survivor, do I get 10 pionts now? Oh well. 6/10 I like it yet I don't... Hm... ~Pol~

I didn't understand really any of it... Sorry, I'm not to good at criting poetry so as far as I know it could have been the best peice of literature ...