Poltergiest

Jack slowly awoke and rubbed his head. He felt a slight bump there and he looked around. He must be dreaming. There were floating pieces of gold and jewlry floating ...

Wow... I don't read alot of peotry but I really liked this. Uh, as far as I could tell the puncuation was fine... It was a little bit mysterious which ...

I thought it was pretty cool. Is it a really song or just something you made up? If you ever make it for really I'd definatly want to hear it. ...

2/10 I don't really get it... Sorry... ~Pol~

Uh, die because the blood suger in my body would eventually get to an unlivible state and I would die... Or something like that... What would you do if you ...

(Being emo's not a bad thing, you know) "Well, seeing as how my entire school got literally destroyed I don't think I have too much time to worry about being ...

Yes it is and thank you. 7/10 Funny... ~Pol~

8/10 I don't know what it is but I love anime/manga ~Pol~

I write cause I have way to many ideas and am usually really bored... (So, thats not the real reason. I don't feel like thinking right now) ~Pol~

1) Mind set: I've tried writing when I don't want to but I always end up writing only two or three sentances that really suck. Try typing every now and ...

*Nervous laughter* Uh... I thought it was going to be a really good story up unto they shouted the Pepsi thing... That, was wierd. Other than that I noticed barely ...

Nothing I haven't seen before. 4/10 ~Pol~

*Gasp!* Thanks... I accually did know you where a girl, its just something you say... Sometimes... *Smashes head into desk* 6/10 ~Pol~

Name- Jack Appearence- Slightly short with black hair. He has brown eyes and fair skin. Age- 14 History- Has grown up on the streets ever since he has remembered. Grew ...

I thought it was good all around but the one thing that stuck out with me the most was his head. The face was well done but his head was ...