Poltergiest

9/10 I love them! They're so cute! ^_^ ~Pol~

Dang... Will I mysteriously find an unessasarily large amount of maney and be allowed to keep it? ~Pol~

Jackpot! Well... Will I get a tv in my room? ~Pol~

Ooo... Will at least one of my aspirations come true? ~Pol~

Yay! Hm... Will I ever get married? ~Pol~

Dang. Uh, Will I be happy in the future? ~Pol~

Is my life going in the right direction? ~Pol~

8.5/10 I really like it. ~Pol~

~Chapter Fourteen~ Unexpected Allies Knall awoke to the unexpected smell of spring blooming. The flowers were growing and the grass had even grown taller from last night. He tiredly stood ...

Okay... Huge info dump here. Uh, I'm gonna have to read it again but my first impression is that you have alot planned out. Thats accually really good and shows ...

*Rubs hands together* Ooo... I sense the start of a pretty good story. Uh, for some reason I wouldn't do my proluage like this but thats only cause I'm wierd ...

Eragon. I first I loved it then realized its been done thousands of times before. So... ~Pol~

3/10 I guess I just don't get it... ~Pol~

Granted but you get so happy you explode. (There were so many other better ones but that would just seem mean) I wish I was the fastest human in the ...

Granted, but it has rabies and kills you. I wish I could go into the world I created in my book