Poltergiest

Khor heaved back the massive stables doors and took several steps to reach an open room littered with straw. Winterblaze lay amongst the hay and darkness and moved his head ...

8.5/10 :D -Pol

:D It rules. I like how theres a definate plot now but I wish it was longer. That being said I really don't know what else to say, sorry... Post ...

8.5/10 very inspiring... -Pol

8.5/10 :D -Pol

8.5/10 :D -Pol

8/10 Hilarious! -Pol

Wow, that was really good. The descriptions of the characters were extremely well done, about thier physical appearance and thier personalities. I've heard of someone turning different shades of red ...

2.5/10 I don't really know who that is, sorry... -Pol

I thought it was really good! I would have liked it more if you had described the abandoned city more (for those of us who have never been to New ...

Sweat poured off his head as he ran, mouth open, panting from the physical exhaustion that was beginning to settle in. The muscles in his legs began to cramp after ...

8.5/10 Nice :D -Pol

If you ment this to be a funny spin off of The Lord of the Rings you did a good job, but if not then thats just not cool. You ...

Interesting. There were very many well written parts of the story, how you described the night sky, the consuming forest and so on. The characters didn't seem to have much ...

~*~*~ The morning was colder than the last few. There was frost on the short grass and Khor brushed some ice out of his hair as he stood. There was ...