Poltergiest

I really liked it, surprisingly better then chapter one to be honest. For some reason I had a strangely clearer picture of him in my head though you only described ...

7.5/10 I didn't really get it but the parts I understood were funny. -Pol

Hmm... Firstly, I was put off by there not being a title, its better to come up with one so people know waht to except before reading. Well, firstly I ...

Gotta tell ya, I was a little put off to reading this, mainly because of the tittle. But I found myself pleasently surprised. You introduced some really good characters, and ...

8/10 Funny. :D -Pol

6/10 -Pol

Well, it wasn't the worst begining to a series I've ever read. :D Oh geez, firstly I wouldn't hold off the mention of the main characters name for so long, ...

6/10 I don't really care about cars, but this one's nice. -Pol

Sasha perhaps. Possibly Sarah? :wink: -Pol

First: 7/10 Second:8/10 -Pol

Silence and darkness ate away at Khor’s flesh and mind. He had followed the sound of the stream and it had led him to the place that had nearly killed ...

Another great addition. I'm not much for grammatical errors so here I go an the few holes in your story. I thought the Pixie thing was exceedingly random. I'm fine ...

9/10 :D Nice. -Pol

8/10 :D -Pol

9/10 Hilarious!!! -Pol