PollarBear14

I see you little tree, my friend and all your splendid leaves. And you can see me too i think between your emerald eaves. How is it that you fair, ...

A quick review. Good poem but my one complaint is that you rhyme in some places but not in others. It is confusing and does not benefit the poem. Either ...

The King's Fear All ears are poised to heed him, the one who bears the crown, Whose duty is to country, and life is honorbound, Who can’t command himself, yet ...

Hi. First of all I want to say how much I love the sort of weary conviction in your words. But although I can feel the emotion in them I ...

Hi. This poem is alright and has the pontential to be very powerful but I think it needs a little bit of work. The flow of the poem is a ...

This poem, with a little work, could be a very confronting, powerful piece. The first stanza is, in my opinion, not benefited by the repetition of the line "I pick ...

This poem is obviously very deep and I really like it because of that. As LosCadaver said, the flow of the poem is a bit klunky but I'm guessing that ...

Thanks remember20 for your feedback. I agree with all of your sugestions so thanks for the help and the positive feedback. It's great for my poetry-writing confidence. By the way, ...

I'll admit that I don't really understand this poem but that does not stop me from really enjoying it. I really like the multiple paradox's all strung together to make ...

I love this poem. The language is exceptional. Such unique, graceful descriptions create beautiful mental scenes. Every word fits really well with the natural theme. Fantastic. The second stanza is ...

I really liked this poem. I have no complaints at all. I loved the language, the thoughts and the emotions coming throught the words. Thanks very much for sharing this ...

Hi. This poem is very positive but I can't help feeling that it's a bit of a cliche or at least your choice of language is. Your similies leave something ...

I quite like this poem. My favourite part is the second stanza because I really like the regret I can feel through the words. Very good for a first attempt ...

Hi guys. This a poem I wrote a while ago and It needs work. I love a few of the lines but some of the others are not so good ...

I really liked the thoughts behind this poem and the language you used. Great job. The last half is especially good because it is filled with a sort of wistful ...