PollarBear14

Nice deep poem with an ominous feel. I like it. Alone, I stand in the shadowy autumn dusk A sweetness tasted in the air, remains; And the evening smells of ...

This is a collection of short I have written. Some are haiku and others are senryu. I apologise for any mistakes I have made in regards to rules. I'd love ...

Why since the earth has aged, have the unruly been free and the peaceful caged?

This is one of my favourite poems on the website! Such a unique idea combined with such clever language is impossible to criticise. If that bar of soap could talk ...

Brilliant.

Hi. Great title to go with a great poem. It was simple and elaborated on a thought that nearly everyone has. Sometimes, I look up into the sky in wonder, ...

I'm sorry but I don't like this poem. It just doesn't make sence. You go all over the place without explaining anything. I don't understand what your getting at. And ...

Great poem. I love the language and the subject matter. You think I don't see how you cling to shadow, like my skin to me and flowers to meadow ? ...

I can’t explain the joy I get when bruises stain my skin. And no I’m not the sort of guy, Who keeps torment within. I link myself with those who ...

I really like this poem. I love the language you have used because it is simple and is read as you would really say it. If you had put any ...

I agree with JCK. Your poem does rhyme and the rhyming is not too strained which is good but the whole message is a bit vague and does not provoke ...

This is my first attempt at some haikus. Alone in the woods, wrapped in the arms of an oak, a hermit sleeps well. Behind a barbed fence, a fox stalks ...

Great poem. I loved how you used such beautiful, clever metaphors that are unique yet very fitting. I could really see what you were talking about and I really like ...

Great poem. Well thought out. Keep writing.

Hi. First off, I really liked this poem. It was just interesting and had great language that was neither too simple nor too complex or abstract. But there were a ...