PollarBear14

I really enjoyed this poem. I liked the dark, twisted feel it had. a few things though. The cool blade slices across the pink flesh. Crimson liquid leaks through the ...

Hi! I liked your poem. It had nice language and a nice rhyming scheme. The ideas were good aswell. I think its a bit short though. You could go into ...

Very nice. Good use of vocabulary. Good ideas. I have one problem though. I know you used "Tis" so that the lines would fit as an iambic pentameter but I ...

Hi. I'm sorry but i don't really like this poem. I get the idea but it is not executed very well at all. Firt of all you need to be ...

Beware the land of waking dreams, where rubies glow and diamonds gleam. Where scoundrels rule and trick the weak. You shall not find what it is you seek. Beware the ...

Nice. Its great how you value the simplicity of a cloud so much and are able to express that love. I look up high above, And think about what they ...

This is a poem inspired by Lewis Carrol's spectacular poem "The White Knights song". It will clear to anyone whose read it (and I urge you to read it) that ...

Hey. This is quite a nice feel-good poem. I like the simplicity of the language and the emotion in the words. But to be honest it was a bit boring........ ...

Im tired of sad poetry, Reminding me that all life sucks, Why not some cute poetry, Of fluffy little ducks? The rhymes in this stanza are a bit awkward. Im ...

Nice. Emotional. Eloquent. Good job. I agree about the pupils though. Find a synonym.

I really liked this poem. It was fun to read and amusing. The humour is a nice touch. If you had tried to be serious then you would have crashed ...

Fantastic poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love every bit of it. This is a topic I am passionate about too and it is so amazing to see someone put the same emotions I ...

Some believe that the ferocity of singularity is more painful than the monotomy of similarity and that the prosperity of individuality isn’t as nice as the familiarity of regularity. But ...

I loved it. The originality was refreshing and the ideas were great. I love your last line. I don't think it matters that it was written as one paragragh because ...

Great poem. I love the obvious emotion that you display yet you don't reveal exactly what you are talking about at all. I think it's about the need to wear ...