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Re: No Heartbeat Detections
To be honest I don't get it. It sounds nice and has good language and flow but I just don't understand. Then again I only read it quickly. Nice work. ...
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Re: Hide from the Artificial Sun
Great poem!
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: Frustration.
My gramar isnt very good. Sorry about that. Thanks for your comments!
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: Frustration.
Um... It like walking on ice, in socks. Like singing, without the words. Its like losing the remote, to a little brother. Like the itch, always needing a scratch. It’s ...
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Re: Envy
Confident, you talk to her. Leaving me in the background, forced to decipher your endless inside jokes, that I wish I was in on. And while you two sit laughing ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: 11:11 11/11/11
Wow! This poem is amazing and so are you. I am usually put off by long poems but this one drew me in and had me hooked till the very ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: Unraveled Memories
This was a very nice poem. Well thought out and brilliantly executed. Dance around the bloody roses Veil your face in the thicket of lies I love this line! Good ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: The Truth About Love
Hey. I don't have time to write a long review so all I will say is 1. Great poem! 2. It should be "Was just a dumb jock." It flows ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: Favorite poets...?
Lewis Carroll is brilliant when it comes to humorous poems I think. I also love Robert Frost, Shakespeare, Dylan Thomas and T.S. Elliot. I dislike Anon.
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: Balliant beauty
Hi. This my first attempt at writing using Elizabethan language. Tell me what you think. O briny queen! O balliant lady! My cup of luck! It doth brim with plenty ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: In the dead of night.
This is by no means a masterpiece and it's not meant to be one. I just wrote a simple poem while eating breakfast. Tell me what you think. A blank ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: Celeste
This is great! Its one of those poems that stands out because of its unique qualities. This poem will go far. First of all, I love your structure. I love ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: Life Story
Fantastic poem! I loved every bit. What am I in this sea of life? Am I unique? Or am I common? Many people filled with strife Ask this boring question ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Outward Bound
I want to write a long review for this so i can get lots of points but all I can say is BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Our future
Nice!
Nov 10, 2011
