PollarBear14

I am Australian and while I like living here and can appreciate all the benefits and privileges of being an Australian citizen (The ones Karzkin listed) I don't love many ...

That link is blocked on my school computer! Damn! Wish I could listen in!

Hi could you review my poem "Abduction" please? Much appreciated. Pollarbear i dont know how to put in the link sorry :?

Ive had what I think is a great idea for a war story but the problem is for it to work I need a detailed knowledge of the military( which ...

If YWS would let me 'like' this twice that still wouldnt be enough. BRILLIANT!

I dont have time right now to do a long review but there are a few things. I love it!!!!!! I love the language and the structure. Because you haven't ...

This is so fantastic. It is officially my favourite poem on this site and in my top three favourite poems ever along with "The white knights song" and "Do not ...

Haha this is great! I can't relate to it but I can empathise with you. Nice work as always. very funny.

Very very nice. I don't have time to review now but I really like this. You are talented.

L-O-V-E I-T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great poem! You can't make a rainbow, Nor strive to reach the pot of gold - It's story of colour can never be told. Unless the skies completely split, And ...

Hi guys. This is really a jumble of thoughts that I have put together as a poem. I don't even really know what i'm trying to say and i hope ...

Hi! I loved this piece! It had so many moments where I just went "Wow that was a nice touch." To be honest though, I liked the first two stanzas ...

This is great. I can feel your emotions and I love how you linked them to a current issue/event. The title doesn't set the poem up to be dark and ...

Hi. I think this is fantastic. It really puts into words that infuriating feeling of trying to teach but not being listened to and it does that very well. I ...