Polkadots

I don't really understand this piece. I can't distinguish any of the cats from each other. There's no detail about them to help me remember them seperately. Hunter was only ...

This is a really cute story. It reminds me of a book on mice I read a while back ago. Anyways, I have a few suggestions. The way your wrote ...

Thanks. Yeah..it's a bit confusing and I'll clarify. This is her last, farewell performance at the end of the show (the ending acts are usually the worst in some circus ...

[Author's Note: After a long spell of writer's block I've finally had the urge to write again! This is also my first story uploaded onto YWS so yay! Anyways...it's a ...

I'm addicted to that show. It's amazing.

I once had a "baby" and I nearly lost it, too, during my move to a new computer because my computer rejected the file a couple of times, but my ...

I think your visuals are amazing. I noticed a few, miniscule most likely typos like "site" instead of "sight" and a few "It's" uncapitilised, but other than that I thought ...

I thought this was interesting bit of information on Dumbledore's character (I personally though Dumbledore was asexual), but now it's completely overhyped. It's all over the local news "beloved Hogwa

I'll review your work, but it's a rule that before posting a story you must review atleast two works and then keep the ratio of reviews to posted stories 2:1. ...

I agree, this blurb is deeply lacking. Add something to it and show the reader. If you meant this to be a prologue than it ruins the whole suspense element ...

Hello, Paw! :D I told you I'd read more so here I am. I noticed a few mistakes I'll point them out in bold once again: CHAPTER 2 I stopped ...

I think your be a bit critical of yourself. I agree with Meep, your idea can be silly but it's the way you exectue it and add your own spin ...

I liked it. The idea of a personal lamp is interesting. The story makes the reader curious. Does she live in the this "dark, earthy" place? Why? The only problem ...

This was a nice piece. They're were only a few errors, which I changed and marked in bold: CHAPTER 1 I could not believe it! Summer was almost at its ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. This is a really nice site and everyone is nice and helpful. I'm glad you joined. Anyways now to ...