Poetriez

I revised this piece a bit ago here it is: Rock Paper Scissors We destroy the Creed, Where animals feed, Some must take lead. We are paper, We destroy nature ...

thanks I forgot to spell check it and stuf fhaha

An evil Character could truly be the protagonist right? And If so The evil Character may also have morals even though they may be twisted.

I like novels taht do with the psyscy of others and other things like that

that was harsh rose but i want to point out that their is an error in his tittle it should be their not there

I have to make a post on here so people know i updated it orresles they may think its old still

Ok yes you cna just dedit your post and make it longer as stuff comes up. ONe thing your prologue seems really long its like 2500 words prologues arent normally ...

Dot get too close to Final fantasy though, with the modern and non modern mix there. But other wise it will work fine make it post-appocaliptic so the planet you ...

I'm not much of a critic so i just tell you how i liked it I liked it was good sometimes nice to get a comment that isnt destructive

Ok well Way I see it is yes you can be behind in and in between at the same time beacuse looking from the front they can between and from ...

yay im the frist one to rply on your first peice here i go in was nice i liked it but keep writting I guess during the time of my ...

Small Horrors the field mouse runs to seek shelter from the storm, it trembles in the great wind. it finds many crumbs in a ransacked barn full of corn, where ...

OK I like it but you know what try something different than the normal fantasy Gene try like a person in modern days and being a sorcerer

AWW that was a nice story :) made me feel good inside anywwyaz yah critique ill do it later remind me if you want im a bit tired so im ...

well i started a story of a person involed in gnags and then gets amniesa and some how gets sucked intothe gang related stuff again and slowly becomes metnlay unstable ...