PoeticGlow

Thank you! Sometimes, I prefer to be vague, believe it or not! :)

Thank you very much! :)

It started with a fling, It ended with a bang. With you, The loaded gun, And all the false songs you sang. Deceiving me cleverly, Preying on my vulnerability; No ...

RayneBow, I love the simplicity of this poem! Your word choices were casual, and yet, they bring such an impact! Each and every line was pared down nicely; I can ...

This is good! Short, but very powerful! I really like the last three lines, knowing what you have when it's finally gone- a bit cliché, yes, but you made it ...

Well done, sir! You have some good imagery going on, and as well as good repetition! Here is my only suggestion though: "Idle words and idle hands Strangers in forgotten ...

This is very good, brokeninpieces! Good flow throughout, deep imagery, and good diction! As kakagirl stated, the only error however is that minor typo! Other then that, bravo! I like ...

This poem is very, very beautiful, from beginning, to end! It reminds me how I too turn to God when I find myself in conflict, even though my faith isn't ...

So this poem just struck me yesterday while I was walking home from school. It's just a little something, but I thought it'd be worth sharing. --- Hate me, hate ...

This poem is specifically about my older brother, John. But this poem can be universal as well obviously. --- The color white: Innocent, Pure. A beautiful thing, Some may ensure. ...

Just a quick note: I realize this poem lacks description, but description was never my strong point. My current style as a poet is to simply say what I need ...

Thanks for the feedback. I realize what you say when you pointed out that I should remove my explaination, but regardless, I'm going to leave it as it is. Who ...

Hey thanks for the feedback, BFG! :) I still consider this poem a draft, so I'll be sure to take your suggestions into thought! -PG

Here's a poem that's purely from my heart... This is about my most recent ex-girlfriend...who has given her heart to someone else. ------ Fading Away I've been running Running for ...

Well, just recall that this is an oldie! :) Thanks for commenting!