PoeticGlow

I love this! Good use of rhyme and diction! This poem certainly has a "vampire" kind of feel to it! "The heart skipping; sealing the bond. Releasing souls; forever fond." ...

Very well done, Bolshevik! I like the format, rhyming, and imagery of this poem! The dialogue does indeed give this poem a rich, powerful effect! This was my favorite part: ...

This is a powerful work of art, StoryWeaver13! I think your title is most appropriate and suits this poem very well! I particularly like these lines: "Will no one, not ...

I agree with 322sivart, this is a very well expressed poem, but the punctuation errors unfortunately take some of the shine off of this piece. Perhaps capitalize the rest of ...

KEMPTON, I actually really like your suggestion; simple, but yet, it does make the final line flow much better! Thanks for the tip!

Here are some of my past insecurities at its eerie best! I had this piece published during my senior year of high school, by this website: . It's sad, however, ...

I like the shift from happiness to sadness, I quite honestly didn't expect that! At first glance, I expected this poem to be about more happiness than sad. It's indeed ...

This is a cute little poem! It reminds me of childhood innocence; makes me miss my own childhood, actually! A brief suggestion though: "Did you laugh? Did you laugh ?" ...

Vague or not, I think this is actually a nice little piece! The length is appropriate, and the flow is decent! I like your conclusion, as well; very bluntly stated, ...

I like this a lot! It's full of that "raw" emotion! Here's a minor suggestion though: "Do you know anyone who has? Do you think you're close to finding?" Close ...

Thank you SO much, RayneBow! :)

I wrote this fairly recently, about a week or two ago. The inspiration for this poem comes from the "ups and downs" of a current relationship I'm in. However, I'm ...

This a good piece! It surely has a lot of potential! However, it can be greatly improved/expanded! Agreeing with Kafkaescence, I think you should consider modifying your conclusion; it's seems ...

Short and sweet is always nice! This is simple, but very heartfelt! As for suggestions, my favorite line that you wrote, the 3rd line, ironically had one minor error: "Let ...

Thank you, Amberla93! And yes, I felt multiple emotions while writings this; heartbroken, disappointed, sad, and angry. The inspiration from this poem actually comes from someone I tried to get ...