PoeticGlow

Thank you, ShadowKnight155 and cali34rniasummer! Your feedback is most appreciated! :)

I like this! The use of old English makes this piece very unique; it's certainly something you don't see everyday today! I enjoyed the last three lines in particular! I ...

Thanks, neonspeeddemon! I actually NEVER thought that this piece would get published, as it is a very personal piece of mine! But hey, life is unexpected, right?

Thank you very much! :)

Thank you, kjr5horses and telle_04! To answer your questions: I have indeed considered song writing, however, I haven't written anything concrete as of yet!

Why, thank you kindly! :)

You left me here, yet you took nothing. Why couldn’t you just take everything? Can’t you see that you’ve left me with something? The pain I feel without you. You ...

Good work, amandajo! As a few members already suggested, I would fix the whole mess of a "textblock" you got going on, and change them into separate stanzas! :) It ...

This is a very nice poem! Ha, it's funny, how boredom tends to bring out the best in us writers! I really liked the whole rhyme scheme you have going! ...

Thank you! :)

Thanks so much, emmaline49! And by all means, when I get famous, tell people I was your best friend! Hahaha ;)

I also like your suggestion, emmaline49! I'll consider changing it! Thanks for the pointer!

Thanks so much! This poem came truly from the heart! :D

How can I tell you Just all that you are? Words dance at the tip of my tongue, And yet, other words seem so far. What words then can be ...

This is truly sad, but it's very beautiful at the same time. It's always so hard to lose someone :( My only suggestion is this: "i saw her smile i ...