PoeticGlow

Hello there! This is a pretty good poem! Good flow, good rhyme scheme, and good overall message! "So she retreats into her mind And builds her castle in the sky ...

I really wasn't aiming for perfection in this poem; this is more of a spur-of-the-moment kind of vent, and while writing , I found myself to be in the rhyming ...

Thank you, MattLangg! And yes, this poem is indeed about someone I missed at the time (someone that I still kind of miss, to tell you the truth!) I shall ...

PurpleHeart, I believe you just made my day! :) It warms my heart greatly to come home, log on to YWS, and see positive and touching feedback on my work! ...

Thanks so much for your inspiring feedback! :)

Again, by no means am I currently sad! I'm happily in a new relationship! I just consider this piece as one of my favorites, for it is beautifully sad! I’m ...

Beautifully written! Simple, and to the point! I LOVED the last line! :) Keep it up!

Bravo, writerwithacause! At first glance, I didn't realize this was a love poem! I had to get down to the 2nd stanza for that realization! And speaking of the 2nd ...

Your words are most appreciated, SmylinG! :) Touching, truly! Thanks so much!

Thank you very much, lele253isme! I've considered maybe self-publishing some of my work! And as for songwriting, I'm hoping I'll meet the right people for that at some point! ;)

Thank you for the honest feedback, everyone! :) I'll be sure to be more cautious with my rhyming choices/rhyming in general, even though this particular piece is rather old! ;)

Hello, sarebear! Thanks for your feedback, I really do appreciate it! By all means, you're not being a hard critic at all! As I stated, this is a much older ...

By no means am I still feeling this way, I'm actually quite happy; I just now consider this poem a dark/sad piece of art! These pictures in my head are ...

This is a nice, heartfelt poem! This actually reminds me of a former friend of mine! To tell you the truth, you've inspired me slightly to perhaps write an apology-like ...

Thanks so much, MiRaCLeS! :) I appreciate that!