PoeticGlow

This poem is very refreshing! I like it a lot! However, the only problem I see are the random parts in your stanzas where you randomly un-capitalize words at the ...

Here's another one I wrote back in 2009. At the time, I was struggling with my belief in God. In the dead of night, I call your name; To hear ...

This poem is very reminiscent of a dream! Your word choices were absolutely perfect, and your flow was flawless! My favorite lines were these: "Then I break through, and see ...

This is a very profound poem! Dark, too! That's what I enjoy reading the most! :) My favorite lines were these: "It's such a mournful sound, and death creeps in ...

This is a good poem! I would just strongly consider adding some punctuation to make your piece more organized! Other then that, you had a very nice rhyme scheme going ...

Here's a love poem I wrote back in 2009; I actually like this piece a lot! What would you say if I asked you to let me in? That in ...

Temi, I couldn't agree with you more! :) Thanks a bunch for the feedback!

Thank you, matthewmazer! I agree: some parents are too pushy, and at some point, we as individuals need to put our foot down, because in the end, it's OUR lives, ...

I was by no means sad when I wrote this; I was simply in the mood to write something dark! I am the one with no direction, Whose path is ...

MissRockers, this is a wonderfully crafted poem! The flow, rhyme scheme, appearance--EVERYTHING was perfectly executed! I honestly have nothing to point out! "Every day of the week she puts on ...

Welcome to YWS! You'll come to love this place, for there are some wonderful writers here! :) Happy writing and reviews! -PG

Thanks for the kind and wonderful feedback, tydecker777! I am usually very simple on my word choices, and don't like to write down anything complex! I believe that sometimes, simplicity ...

Hello there, AmeliaCogin! Thanks for your feedback! Allow me to try and make some clarity for you: "Do you know the control that you no longer bear?" ( what does ...

I like your suggestion, Soulkana! Thank you, and happy writing to you as well! :)

I like this poem a lot, it's simple, it's direct and blunt, but it screams with emotion! Good flow and good rhyme scheme as well! I enjoyed how you concluded ...