PoeticGlow

Kuyoko, thank you very much! I hope you can find comfort in my words! :)

lele253isme: To answer your question, I look at a "lie" as something that is spoken or said, whereas "deceit" is a form of physical deception...I don't know if that makes ...

The minutes turn into hours, And the hours turn into days; But you swear he’ll come home to you, That it’s only a phase. A push turns into a shove, ...

Hey KatTrain, this poem was pretty intense! These lines gripped me the most: "Daddy, I don't know what to do anymore, my tears hold silent congress on the floor, they ...

Hey there, Flower~Child! Overall, I really enjoyed this piece! What stood out for me in particular though was this stanza: "I listen to the invisible clock waiting for the minute ...

Thanks for the feedback, Jessa! :) Allow me to try and clarify this stanza: "That’s it, yes, yes… Up, down, and all around… Your every touch is like a pleasant ...

I hope I'm posting this in the right area, but if not, then please just let me know! But anyway, yes, here is in fact my very first attempt at ...

I like this! It reminds me of a poem I wrote, actually, titled "I'm Sorry", as well! I like how you made the ending abrupt---"like the ending of a friendship"---I ...

Allie, this is a very cute poem! The rhyme scheme is well executed, and the message you're conveying is something I can truly admire! I actually think that this poem ...

A simple piece, but very, very heartfelt! I like the reassurance you give yourself at the end of the poem: "My dreams. They will keep on living, After my time." ...

This piece is a bit puzzling...I have to agree with Matthews: what exactly are you trying to convey? I mean, the piece is written well, I just don't understand the ...

Thank you very much, tydecker777! I am happy to hear that you enjoy my work! :) It very much warms my heart!

Thank you very much, Sassykat! I appreciate your feedback, and perhaps I shall reconsider the night/alright rhyme again!

I wrote this today. This poem was a "spur of the moment" kind of thing; I quite literally woke up and just wrote it. So, critics, try and not be ...

Hello, dreamsingray! Overall, I think this a nice little poem! I find the length appropriate and a universal message that everyone can relate to! However, my only criticism is in ...