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Re: Ever Since
Thanks for commenting. To answer your question, what I'm "fearing" is myself. To explain, I blame myself for my Dad's death. You see, he was an alcoholic, and he was ...
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Ever Since
Ever Since Ever since the day, I wished you away, I’ve wondered how could I live with myself, How could I cope, When part of me knows that I’m not ...
Dec 18, 2008 -
Re: Sorry dad
I like this piece, a lot. It's very deep. I always enjoy a short poem. Although, it could be better, maybe a better choice of words is in order? Other ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: The Ghosts.
Very powerful stuff you got going on here! Other than the suggestions that Explosive_Pen gave you, well done on this!
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: Dead
I enjoyed this...I write a lot of dark poetry myself, and I must say, this is a pretty good piece. Maybe it could be a little longer? You know, just ...
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: The Light
Who do you go to when your life goes dark? ------ The Light I see the light, So distant, And far, A twinkling sphere, That’s much like a star. How ...
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: No Better Sound
I appreciate the honest feedback, guys. :) I might improve this piece sometime!
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: Night
Beautiful write! :D
Dec 12, 2008 -
Re: No Better Sound
Here's a little something I wrote for my American Lit. class in school. So, what's your favorite sound? =) ------ No Better Sound There’s no better sound, Than the sound ...
Dec 12, 2008 -
Re: Hi there!
Greetings, Everyone! I'm PoeticGlow, but you may call me Vincent if you'd like to! Here's why I'm here: To share my poetry, and view others' beautiful writes! Looking forward to ...
Dec 12, 2008
