PoeticGlow

Thanks for the feedback everyone! I'll be sure to take in all of your suggestions, and try to fix this piece up! -PG

Behind The Glass Here I stare, Behind the glass, My vision so obscured. I look for truth, A meaning in my life. But yet I find nothing, Nothing but the ...

Thanks! :) This poem came from the heart, so I didn't put too much thought into it. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for the feedback. I'll be sure to take out the "dwell" part. As for "solution", I know it may sound like it doesn't fit very well with the poem, ...

Breathtaking. Simply breathtaking. I'm sure that they're many who can relate to this. I know I can. Stanzas 2 and 3 are by far my favorite. You have a gift, ...

WOW :shock: You've done an excellent job here. This piece is just wild with feeling! I just have a question about this line: "Do I surrender, is that down to ...

helenelizabethclarke- Your feedback to my poem was brilliant. I couldn't agree more when you say that real-life situations are the best things you can right about. That's my mission: To ...

No need to apologize! :) After all, I wanted to see what reviewers think. I really like the suggestions you've given me, and I'll be sure to modify this. I ...

Another poem about my Dad for my American Lit. class. I have yet to get a grade on it, but I'll keep everyone informed. I still consider this a draft..but ...

Powerful stuff! I really enjoyed the two opening lines. I think you did a great job! -PG

I enjoyed this :D The last stanza is most powerful! Beautiful. Although, it can be improved. I agree on what Hassan said by expressing complex feelings with simple words. I ...

Gahks- I never really thought of it that way! I really like your suggestions! I'll be sure to keep that in mind for future poems! Thank you. :D Hassan- To ...

:shock: This poem is amazing! Truly, I'm speechless! You have talent, there's certainly no doubt about that! I enjoyed this so much...And I can truly relate to what you're saying ...

This is really beautiful. You did an outstanding job. I really love the message your giving. I know that feeling of wanting to move on, and how the things we ...

Thanks :) Stuff like this is where I can pour all my heart into.