PoeticGlow

I do believe you two are quite right! I shall fix this minor error right away! Thanks for commenting!

This is a good piece, Cailey! Use of simple words or not, this poem was broken down very nicely! Good job! :) My favorite lines were these: "The rose’s thorns ...

This is a sequel to another poem I wrote, titled "I Should Have, which I will eventually submit. I could not run away, Even if I wanted to; Because undeniably, ...

That's definitely my plan, unsocialbutterfly!

Here's my first ever song collaboration with my good friend, Dina Darling! I wrote the 1st verse and chorus, while she wrote the 2nd verse and bridge! This will eventually ...

This is a pretty good poem, leeanna13097! However, just a few suggestions: try to go for some punctuation, because it's difficult to get the full effect of your poem without ...

This is great, Anwesha! Your diction is simply wonderful here! My favorite lines are these: "A flowing river of dreadful thoughts, An endless string of things I sought, but never ...

I like this, livurdestiny! It clearly shows who your real friends/enemies! My favorite part is this line: "Friends will pick you up once you fall but Best Friends- Will push ...

Thanks so much, Amberla93!

Thanks everyone thus far for your honest, kind, and helpful feedback! :)

Here's a little something I jotted down 2 days ago. Basically, this poem conveys the simple fact at how tomorrow is never guaranteed. Was in the rhyming kind of mood. ...

This is pretty intense, jknudsen! Here's a few suggestions though: "Tattoos cover my body, recognition of my sorrow, Sadly , it's time to let go... (add a comma after sadly) ...

Touching poem, KelsRich1! This is very reminiscent of Kelly Clarkson's song, "Breakaway"; I like how this poem reminds me of it! I see you already fixed your punctuation errors, so ...

Thanks a bunch, Justagirl! :)

Ignatius5453, thanks so much!