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Haha, I actually found that kind of amusing! xD

That's probably the best bit of writing, I've read in a while! You didn't overdo the humour, so it still seemed believable! ;) I want some of your ability! xP ...

Well I haven't read anyone else's critiques, but i'm here to offer my humble advice! As a male who frequently writes things from a females point of view, i feel ...

Aha, thank you! ;) I'll also be going back and adding in the words that I wasnt allowed to repeat! xD Thanks for the crits! :)

haha, Yeah. The contest was for exactly 100 words, none repeated... And it appears you managed to notice the absence of the 'and' that i was desperately trying to avoid! ...

** I had a bit of trouble getting rid of 'the', 'and', 'a' and all that lot...but here it is. I hope it makes sense. My brain can't bring itself ...

** Another random drabble vaguely linked to the way I feel...I'm not sure if it would fit better as lyric poetry or something, but I've never considered myself as a ...

Sometimes I wonder if I'm awake when I write...looking at some of them errors! xD

**A completely random drabble about a weird thought I had... Doodlebug- Plus-One Louis glared down at the ink caterpillar that he'd sketched on his paper, the caterpillar stared back. Despite ...

-salutes- Reporting for duty! mustache ... Hmm I could have sworn it was moustache, but I was wrong! xD Anyway, all that's really left to say is that it was ...

I'm detecting a hint of British grammar here. The one quote mark for direct quotes, spelling center as 'centre.' Anything else? :roll: It's not just Brits who use single quotes ...

NOTES: Well I wanted to write something for Remembrance didn't come as easily as normally...and it sounds a bit abstract and weird...? Any Comments/Suggestions/Words of praise/Rants of criticism are a

//"Milly here?" I asked him. He yawned showing me his multi coloured teeth, then he scratched the hair on his chest for a minute or so, thinking. I think he ...

I like that actually, things can be made to look so much more amusing when you explain them from the point of few of a child, so much more room ...

(Well I quite like this idea...I think it goes a bit iffy in the middle, but I like it) A True Hero By Plus-One He’d sit there and watch them ...