PlasticStarlight

I really liked the first version of this. This version looks like it should be part of CD cover or something. The background gives it a whole new emotional tone. ...

Donnie Darko is a pretty stellar movie, I'd say. I love the points it explores about destiny and fate. Also the bits and piece about time travel ( if you ...

Hey Starlight! First off I love your subject. :P I grew up landlocked but get to live by the ocean for school. You've definatly got a fan here. I like ...

A wee disclaimer. This is a short one shot. I was supposed to be working on my real book instead. Now, I'm fully aware my mechanics and grammar are worse ...

Hi Veritas, I'm pretty new here too. I should warn you now, this place is addictive. Addictive, but helpful, and a people here seem to be actual writers. Imagine that ...

HI! I haven't read the other parts yet, but you've got me hooked. I want to know whats happening to Sam. There's a good amount of exposition. The section isn't ...

Hi there! This sounds like the start of a really interesting premise. There is a lot of exposition going on there, I think it would be more effective if you ...

Hi! interesting format.The first line is a really effective way to show the passage of time " leaves are falling down in my world fade in fade out", at least ...

The eggshell gray sky stares indifferent as the sun drifts across blank fields. Curled in my burrow of blankets and sheets. The thin arch of spring peeks along the foothills. ...

The lake is orange when we find him elbow deep in wetland, his whelp-like whine thrown to shore like a life line. We stand with empty hanging hands as the ...

Just coming in on chapter 9, I'm definatly going ot have to go back and read what's happened before. I like that it is written in first person and that ...

P.S. Fishr- you're my hero.

I'm with Fishr here. I'm sure the kindle and e-books are wonderful things for this technologically dependant world we live in, that's what we're told. My one question is, if ...

Ello, Ello, Ello. What do we have here? Why a little bit o'randomosity! Yes, just some unscripted info about myself. I'm a writer. I write, it's what I do. That's ...

Well, hello there. Seems as though I've stumbled upon something potentially wonderful and useful. At least I hope so. I'm a writer by trade, or at least I claim to ...