PixieStix

Fortunately It stoped raining.

Me and MilknCookies. She is an awsome writter. and so am I! ~Pixie2~

this is my story, I worked so hard on it and I really hope you like it!Please relpy and give me tips! ~Pixie2~

I am Lori May. I was born on September 3rd 1942 in Atlanta, Goregia. I made a promise to my dad I would never speak of the night. the night ...

I really like it. I think that you had no mistakes in grammar, but you are always a true writter. (I would guess, based on this story.)Great job!!! ~ PIxie2~

Hi this is Pixie2. I think you had a pretty good start but, Smetimes I did not know who was speaking. Next time mabey you have to write the name ...

I love the title so much and i love that. The title gives me an idea of the passage. Great job. ~pixie2~

Also I loved your name for the poem iot really gave me goosebups, Thats why I wnated to read it! ~Pixie2~

The first line I think had something spelled wrong but, overall it was great. I loved it so much! ~ Pixie2~

This gave me an idea of whats going on. I love how you felt you wanted to write it and you did. A true writer does not just write somthing ...

Very exaustic, but it kept me up! It was interesting and seemed real, or is it real? I loved it an I hope that other people will enjoy it as ...

It made me want to be in the setting! Great job and keep up the good work! ~Pixie2~

love the idea of the passage but, next time hold off on the Mommys! ~Pixie2~

I love the way you start the story, Gives me an idea of whats going on and I love to see that in writting.Also what I liked is you are ...

I like the topic, And I know what you are trying to say but, You need more detail and feedback of what is going on. The perspective of the poem ...