PixieStix

Hi, This is a tip thing. I think that you could have used more discription, like sometimes in the beginning you were great!! But overall it was one of the ...

please leave comments!! ~Pixie~ Liv, laugh,glow

She would transform herself into a little girl but the magic would wear off and she would get caught. her name is Fernengala, she is from the city of Harenmen ...

When you are writting a story you always have to include some details. When you just leave it blank then it seems boring with just words to express the way ...

I love it But I think the rhymes could be improved some. You made details and I love that so much!!!But could use some more. ~Pixie2~

It sounds pretty scary but overall I loved it and I thought that it was alittle confusing. I think that you need to rhyme alittle more!!! ~Pixie2~

First of all, I agree with the last reply. The Big Mac did quite shock me, 2nd of all at the ending of the story you finished it quickly. You ...

Points rate: 7/ ok i will repaint it for you, This paint is to dry!!!

Camp horizon 1 As Ronny was walking out of his blue tent, Skylar made confusion on when the schedule was due to camp Horizon. Camp Horizon was not just any ...

I loved It!!!! You had such discription. From just reading the title I knew that it would count as a easy target to read. 1.You need to work on language. ...

This short story reminds me of true love. The emotion you use is divine. I don't know how you can imagine this fantasy in your mind.but everything in the beginning ...

at the end, I had to rush because I did not know what to say, Any thoughts? ~Pixie2~

If you could see this world. The trees and the braches. The bugs and animals. All of the beautiful life here in Africa. The land is filled with water. A ...

granted but it you will have to.... microwave it. I wish that all people will be treated the same no mater what nationality they are. And mabey you can just ...

Snoik And.... Titan4ever Wow what a great pair. mabey even.... Milkncookies and ? What do you think?