PixieStix

thanks and i dont take it offensive!:)

Thks its fine

The Free Slave By: Kaitlyn Pfeil Chapter 1: Slavery escapes decisions. Pushing me will not wake me up. You have to stab my broken pain to express the sun rising. ...

thank you and but i dont understand how it is cute.well anyways thx>>

I like it but i still do not get the title realtes to the poem but overall i think that your plot is quite inyeresting concuding to nature. I think ...

Im just kidding i dont go to that school but i still dont like health class

Im one of those people and i dont want to exerzize even more but i still have to in gym class in the huge school they call flacon cove... But ...

I think that was awsome, keep it up stardom!!! -pixie

Thanks for the review!!!

" Romeo tall and bold, can I shall I be yours?" Lilac muttered. " I will extract your heart romeo, dont extract mine, I love you..." She kissed him gently. ...

I really like the posture of the story. I like how you added a twist to your ending, although i think that you wanted to rush the ending. For example: ...

I will have scuba divers go down and bring it back up and then fix the electronects. Oh no they are off duty today!

I really liked it. I think that nothing is wrong with this book. Great job!

I really enjoyed your poem. Love and conpassion always wins me. I understand it. I hope that you become a great writer someday!

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