PirateQueen

hehe yes i meant pen not pin oops #Queen of the Pirates#

I saw some else write a haiku and was wonder if this is correct. Please sign my guestbook It's pages are very blank Take a pin and sign

Well done. I would have liked to know more about Jacob and why a person had threatened Maggie. Interesting ending and I mean that in a good way. I didn't ...

I liked it and like the others can't really find anything wrong with it. Well done #Queen of the Pirates#

I loved it! Other than some typos it was great. I liked how you made liza and ellie like different people. Aslo it would have been nice to know a ...

This is barely the beginning of this story, but I need to make sure it's a good idea for a story before i continue. Aslo does this make sense? Thoughts ...

Wow this was really good. And to think I almost thought the kid was going to be eaten hehe i really loved how it flowed. "What is it?" They scream, ...

Hey everyone please feel free to critique and comment. Thanks! #Queen of the Pirates#

You wave I smile shyly Hoping you won't talk to me Passing you in the hallway I try to meet your eyes But your smile overwhelms me And I laugh ...

I really like it and it's so true. Keep up the good work #Queen of the Pirates#

I loved it. Other than the few spelling errors i really enjoyed it. Personally I liked the title. #Queen of the Pirates#