Pippiedooda

:D I think you have edited well again here! I liked the inclusion at the beginning of her wanting to get back to her room :) Just a few tiny ...

Hi! :D Thanks for the PM, I agree with the comments Music has made but here are some more nitpicks ;) I have to hover about the house now because ...

Done whitetiger :D I thought it was a great piece, good luck in the contest!

Hello! :) Thanks for posting in my WRFF thread, I always love to read your work! :D I agree with the comments before me but here are some more nitpicks ...

Hi! :) Another good part :P I think this was a great twist! "Wait a minute, are you like. . . friends with her? I mean don't get me wrong ...

Hey! :D Thanks for the PM, I love this story! As soon as I was inside, I could hear sobbing coming from one of the cubicles. Deciding on the one ...

Hi! :D Sorry it took me so long to get to this part! Could you PM me with each new chapter? I really enjoy your story but I am awful ...

Sorry I only just saw this posted! I like this part, it's getting even more exciting :P I'm so glad you have posted the next chapter :) He had fun ...

Hi sorry it has taken me so long! If I leave it a while in between reviews don't worry about PMing me to nudge me into writing the next one, ...

Hi! :D I don't usually review like this but as the story is quite long I thought it might save time :) My comments are written in bold and the ...

Hi! :D I think this is a very interesting beginning, I loved how you jumped straight in! I agree with the comments made before me but have a few of ...

Hello again! :D I think this is much better, I really loved the improvements. There were a few little things that I’ll point out but you don’t really have to ...

Hello again :D wow! I was not expecting that! I thought this was a really good part, it could do with going over a little bit in the details, but ...

Hi! :D I really enjoyed this part! I agree with the previous comments but here are some more ;) when someone knocked on the front door. I’d maybe instead have ...

Done forever! :D I warned you about my lack of helpfulness in poetry :oops: but I thought it was brilliant :)