Pippiedooda

I liked the plot to the story and the contrast between two perspectives on what happened, i do have some comments though. The beginning is very frantic and although its ...

I liked how the story played out and want to know what happens next! The basic outline of the story is good, there are just some spelling mistakes and connectives ...

Thanx thefireinmeisJC for commenting my work! It is definetly my weakness in writing to include too much description, next time i am going to have to put a reign on ...

Hi, this is my first entry here so it would be great to hear any comments anyone has on it and any ways to improve the story. Thankyou very much ...

Hi i'm new here so sorry if i'm not that helpful. I really liked your story, I thought how the beggining jumps straight into the scene really worked and enough ...

I'm new here and don't have very much experience in critisizing other peoples work, so I'm sorry if I don't offer much help! I thought that the idea and how ...

Hi i'm new, my names Pip (short for phillippa) and I love writing stories so I thought I'd join, I don't really know what to do first on this website ...