Pippiedooda

I like the story so far, i thought the beginning was a nice way of introducing the characters and the situation, i hope you write more! There were quite a ...

This part needs some work so any reviews would be very much appreciated! I know the story switches back and forth quite a bit but thats just for the beginning, ...

I found this story very interesting, i liked it- it was original and the begginning drew me in :) I won't go over sentences that i think can be improved ...

I liked this story, it was a nice caption of a moment and i enjoyed the way it unfolded. I think for something you did in one night with no ...

Wow- thats a great story! I really loved the whole storyline and the ending was really good, very exciting too! There were a few spelling mistakes throughout the text and ...

I really liked the idea of this story! It shows an interesting twist to the traditional fairytale and would make a good begginning for a longer story. I think its ...

Thankyou for all the reviews I got on the begginning! :) I was really stuck on how to continue as it was one of those things that I just started ...

I'm thinking of using this as the start to a story and would really appreciate any coments on how to improve and whether i should carry on with it. Thanks ...

I thought this was a good story, really sweet ending! :D There were a couple of things i thought could be improved on but overall i enjoyed reading it- to ...

I thought this was a really good story, a nice length and i liked the ending. I liked the style of writing too :) , only a few comments on ...

I wanted to focus more on action instead of lengthy descriptions so gave it a go at writing something short, any comments would be really helpful :D “How dare you ...

Good story! At first i was a little confused but i think that makes you want to read on to find out what is going on. Just a couple of ...

This is quite a short prologue, i would advise adding more to it, but still a good start! Just a few things i think could be improved: bracing for the ...

Hi again, I liked the changes! :) Like i said before, the stroy is great, i only have a couple more comments on things that could be improved, and thats ...

I liked that! I thought the metaphor was very beautiful, it was a very moving story, very sad. The rose was a good image to use as it is wordly ...