Pippiedooda

Hi :) I'm intrigued as to what happens next- nice cliffhanger at the end. You've got quite a few punctuation mistakes, so I'll go through each paragraph and try to ...

Hi there :) I enjoyed this piece, I loved the humour in the conversation and thought overall it was quite well written- I'm glad your continueing with it as I ...

Hi first of all awwwwwww! :D Really sweet story! I loved your use of decription and I thought this piece was very nicely written. On with the review :) Possible ...

Hi I'm surprised no-one has reviewed this! I found it very interesting, at first a little confusing but that just made me want to read more :P- I like how ...

Hi I found this letter very well done! :) It was nicely refreshing to read something in a different style and I think if you wanted you could develop it ...

This was a good way of grabbing the readers attention, I loved the way you dived straight in! :) A couple of things I think can be improved upon are: ...

Hi :) I like the plotline for this story, you managed to reveal more about the main charcter without telling the reader directly which was good and the whole piece ...

Hi there :) so far I really like this! I thought it was very well written and I love your use of description- instantly I hate Ella's parents and feel ...

I like your story, you've managed to keep it effective and powerful despite being so short- good job! :D I found it really hard to think of any possible names ...

Hi :) I liked your story- it was different to anything I have read before and interesting, I like how it unfolded. I think that you should break this up ...

Hi you shouldn't be worried, this is really good! I'm really curious and I like the twist on fairies and animal parts, I hope you write more :) I couldn't ...

Banned for having pink hair! Although it is pretty cool :)

Hi me again :D thanks for your PM! I liked this chapter too, it gave a littel more detail on the characters and again I really felt for Amanda! Heres ...

Long dark hair, greens eyes, slim, tall and freckles! :D (Don't know why seeing as the picture's quite different)

This was a good start- I like the dialogue at the beginning, its a nice way of jumping into the story and introducing the main character. Luciano is such a ...