Pippiedooda

Hi me again again :D I like how you have continued with this! Really good ending to this part too- although sad :( on with the review :) Like I ...

8/10 because I think its a beautiful picture :)!

Hi :) , this is a very powerful storyline- I think you have managed it quite well. I read the prologue as well and I thought that was a good ...

Hi there :) I like this story so far- I think you've got a really good beginning here! Firstly I think you should break up the beginning paragraph. I'd put ...

Just read the prologue properly and I'm liking that too! Things make more sense now - I half skimmed it when I first went to read chapter one because I ...

Hi :) I found the beginning to your story very interesting and generally well written, here's a few comments on possible improvement: He knew something unusual, no, extraordinary was about ...

Me again :D I like how you switch between the past and present, this was very well written too- I love how he's taken on his friends speech although I ...

Hi here's number 7 :D All the reviews I got last time were brilliant so thanks to everyone who commented on part 6! This part has some explanation but it ...

Hi :) This was a brilliant story- I loved it. It was very involving and well written, great piece of work! :D On with the review: she just closed her ...

I don't know why no-one has reviewed this yet- its really good! I loved the style of writing you used and the twist at the ending was great- I'm going ...

Hi me again :) I like this part too, I really enjoy the humorous twist you put on things. Here are a few comments on possible improvement: As the Police ...

This is a really beautiful caption of a moment, I found it very moving and brilliantly written- well done :) I couldn't find much that could be improved but I ...

Nice cliffhanger ending! (Except for its quite annoying as I want to know what happens :P) I think this is pretty well written and doesn't really need much editing, I ...

I really enjoyed this piece, I thought it was a great opening to a story and very well written- especially for someone who has just been plowing through and not ...

Hi :D This sounds pretty perfect already! I'm sure you'll do well in the contest :) I knew the devil, and he wouldn't likely be making exceptions. I think this ...