Pippiedooda

Hello again! :D I'm not disappointed at all! I like how you have shown more to do with her friends and Max and also the worry surrounding her cousin- I'm ...

Rosey Unicorn- Done! I had to be very picky with your piece though as I really couldn't find that much :) Its very well written. Phantom- Done! I thought your ...

Hello! :D I like how you have introduced the new characters and look forward to seeing how they tie in with those already introduced- Crueton was really funny! :P Crueton ...

Hey Phantom! :D I can't really see many things that could be improved, I think the previous reviews pointed out the important ones but I'll see if I can spot ...

Hi! :D I'm going to have to be kind of picky here as from reading through I can't see anything that jumps to mind, this is very well written and ...

Kat- Done! :D I like your beginning and hope you carry on with it :) I did make some suggestions but as always ignore me if you think differently, I ...

Hi! :D I'm looking forward to how you carry on with this, I like how you have introduced the main characters so far :) I noticed some little mistakes that ...

Crouching Tuna- Done! :D I thought it was a really good chapter! Sorry for the longness of the review :P If I have time I'll look back over the prologue ...

Hello again! :D Sorry it took me a while to get to this, I do love this chapter though! I noticed some grammar mistakes so I'll review as one big ...

Hello! :D Sorry I did see this up then completely forgot :oops: it's a truly great chapter though, I love how Lilac is back! Although Aryan are not fond of ...

Mimz- Done! :D I loved it, I made a few suggestions but you know how picky I can be :P could you let me know when more is up? I ...

Hi Mimz! :D It's been a while since I have read any of your work, this piece is pretty good! I'll go through being picky though since you wanted honest ...

I reviewed the opening part to your story Tuna and gave some suggestions on how I think you could make it more gripping- I did read the rest though as ...

Hello! :) I'll go over the first part with some nitpicks as I see you have added some extra description in to since it was previously gone over and I ...

Hello! Sorry it took me a while to get to this- it's great as always :D However the thing I feel makes Ursine's what they are, their land how it ...