Pippiedooda

Hi! :D I'm really glad you posted the next part! “Kali, come back,” I yelled, chasing after her. As he is yelling this, maybe an exclamation mark after ‘back’ might ...

So here's the next part! Thanks so much for everyones helpful comments on my last piece :D Hope you like this one! She lay her hand on the cool handle, ...

Hi forever! :D Thanks for posting in my will review thread! It got buried a while ago :shock: Anyway as it said on my thread, I am not that good ...

Hi! :D I read through your first chapter and prologue and I think you have a really good storyline here- I haven't heard a plot like it and it sounds ...

Hi dudette! Thanks for the PM, I still love this story! :D As always I have to be super picky in my ninja style reviews when going through your work ...

Hi Haruno! :D That's not such a bad name! You should hear my full one... but you never will mwahaha :twisted: Anne Rice is a brilliant author :) She's one ...

Hi again! I'm glad the next part is posted, its a really sweet story :) All he had to do was ask her about her life back in Assyriac and ...

June you are amazing! I don't want to repeat what is written everywhere on here but it is so true!! :D I'd like to report some people too :) Mimimac- ...

Hi Gladius! :D Sorry I took so long, chat distracts me :oops: I have read the first chapter and am reviewing that now before moving to the next, and I ...

Hi :) I thought this was a really good introduction! I can't see much that could be changed but if I am being really picky then there were a couple ...

Hi! :D I love reading this, I really do. Each part makes me laugh, right now I am typing with a grin on my face. Great work! Blink. It sounded ...

Hi :D sorry I took a while to review! This story just keeps getting better and better! The pale, dead moon shone impertinently down on me; the thin slivers of ...

Hi :D I thought seeing as you were reading through my work I'd repay the favour! I know this was posted ages ago but I thought I'd take a look ...

Congratulations June! :D You deserve it

Hi Armagan :D Yay! You posted it! I like this part, I felt so sorry for her :( I agree with the points Lucy has made but have some more ...