PinkViper

Hello! I will review to the best of my ability for you. Corrections are in red . This is something I've had in mind for awhile, but I haven't got ...

Greetings, Darkwingz! I'm Bella. Or Pink Viper, whichever. Yes, this is your place. I'm new also, and I already love it! Everyone is really friendly, and there are some talented ...

7/10 ...Interesting? Not sure what it means, but cool :D

I love this poem! The end was totally unexpected, yet cute! I really like how you got into the mind of the animal. I believe you used the senses very ...

Wow, this was very exciting! I love how you kept it interesting, but the tone was soft at the same time. You gave us a backstory, which was great. I ...

Hi, I'm Bella. I was wondering if you saw my post when I was new a couple days ago because it looks very similar. Like, copycat similar. Hey! I'm Mackenzie. ...

Note: This is my very first piece I'm posting! A rough prologue of what I hope will be a great story. I'm open to any and all criticism. I hope ...

Hi Kas! I love both bands, but you already knew that :D Glad we could talk!

I like to read and write fantasy and realistic fiction. My favorite German bands are Tokio Hotel and Cinema Bizarre (if only they weren't broken up :( ). Yeah, I ...

Hi! I'm fourteen, too, and a newbie. I wish I had enough courage to show my writing to my friends, but it just doesn't happen for me :P I look ...

Hey! I'm Bella. I'm 14 years old, and I've loved to write since I could read. That was probably 13 years ago. :D I've been looking for a good writing ...