PinkViper

What up, Lindsey? I'm Bella. I think Owl City is okay. I prefer German pop bands, though (I know, I'm abnormal :D ). Anyway, I like to write fantasy, too! ...

Hello! I'm Bella, and I shall review your story for you. Let me start by saying that this was just beautiful. I love how you chose the title, for one ...

Banned for your avatar having rediculously and abnormally long hair.

10/10 Johnny Depp, you gotta love him.

So this is something I've been working on for a while. I have no idea if it's okay or not so far because I haven't shared it with anyone. Also, ...

You're so welcome! :D

Hello, my name is Meghan. I am tired of being an average girl, and I want a life exciting beyond belief.

Haha! :D Funny stuff.

Hello, welcome to YWS! I'm Bella and I will do my best to review your piece. I'm fairly new at this, so bear with me. Corrections are written in red ...

Frosty

Hi, I'm Bella, and I shall be (more or less) reviewing your short story ;) So I honestly have nothing bad to say. Grammar was good, punctuation and spelling were ...

Hi, Viper here! This was very refreshing to read, and I have absolutely nothing evil to say about it. Grammar was great, and so was spelling. I loved how much ...

Since you need help in splitting this up a bit, do not fear! I guess this won't really be a review, but here we go. I would say to definitely ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm Bella. I am fairly new myself, but I love this site already. I'm sure you will too! Everyone is very friendly. We will help you out ...

Man, I wish I had a dog! I really have nothing to say about this, other than it's beautiful! I really got the connection between you and your dog just ...