PinkPanther

thanks, you're so kind :smt004, sapphirewednesday...

Grass is prickling at my feet, my thoughts are restless in the heat. I want to be the rushing creek, without a care of what I seek... I see it's ...

very cute. First i thought it was acctual letters as in the mail, but then i realized it's letters as in the alphabet! classic!!

A sincere and tender kiss- you planted on my cheek, It made my bones feel soft and weak and swole my heart with priceless bliss. You made me feel so ...

Beautiful. I liked how it was simple, but still expressed some emotion. It flowed very nicely and made so much sence! Unlike some. Or maybe I'm just stupid.:) Nice poem!

Wow. That was very good. Not that I would encourage anyone to do that to themselves, but that was throughly heart-felt. A good story makes you feel something and this ...

Grass is prickling at my feet, my thoughts are restless in the heat. I want to be the rushing creek Without a care of what I seek... I want to ...

That was...deffinitely one of a kind. I liked it, though most of the time I didn't think it was quite clear what you were talking about. It was unique and ...

What a true poem. Though there were some spelling errors, i liked it very much. Many people feel that way, but i haven't heardanyone express it that well in words. ...

I liked the last line "you'll remain within me, even if it kills me". And if you can write that in 2 secs , i can't imagine what something would ...

Very nice work. I like the truth of it. It really points out the difficulties and fears of most people. Life is too complicated for us to understand, and sadly ...

That was very cute. Though I didn't know lack of lighting is a way to get rid of head aches. I'll make sure to remember that.

I think this is my favorite so far! It's really good! I think the- "Lacking in smart words" is what made it so melancholic. It's really a beautiful poem, so ...

I liked that a lot. Very dramatic, though i would have put the wording differently in some places. I liked the way it flowed into each verse, and how down-to-earth ...

I think it's a cute poem. I will not tell you to capitalize the "i"'s, because i don't do that either. But i think you could edit it a bit ...