PinguN18

AyumiGosu17: Thanks for all those, hopefully there all right now. I'm always rubbish at where to put what where. I really appreciate it. lilymoore: I remember you commenting on my ...

So I've been working on this quite a lot today. Usually I love writing the introductions and the rest gets a bit left but this just won't leave me alone. ...

Another edited version. I hope it an improvement. Thank both of you for your advice. I used as much of it as I could. _____________ January 21st was the day ...

January 21st was the day you changed my life without even realising. The sun was shining. I recognized you from somewhere, I had no idea where. I knew that sheepish ...

Thanks for that. It's to first thing I've ever wrote properly and went in blind. I'll definatly take on board your advice. It's very good. I do see now how ...