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AyumiGosu17: Thanks for all those, hopefully there all right now. I'm always rubbish at where to put what where. I really appreciate it. lilymoore: I remember you commenting on my ...

That first night I met Jack, he was on the brightly coloured dance floor with his best friend, Luke, as I entered with Lucy. She already knew them both; Luke ...

That first night I met Jack, he was on the brightly coloured dance floor as I entered with Lucy. He was with his best friend: Luke. Jack was dancing up ...

So I've been working on this quite a lot today. Usually I love writing the introductions and the rest gets a bit left but this just won't leave me alone. ...

I've not posted anything for ages, I know I didn't post much before anyway but I've suddenly had bursts of inspiration for a new story. It is loosely based on ...

Over the summer we've been set a project to come up with 8-10 photos to illustrate part of our own cultual whether that be music, friends or racial background. I ...

When you walk up the steps to the gardens you loose your bearings a little because you don't expect to see gardens on the roof of a shopping centre. I ...

I didn't think it was so big when I uploaded it as my other wasn't and they both the same size so I'm a little puzzled at that but it ...

This is from a walk i went on over the Easter weekend. They was a family with two young girls and the dad had been round earlier in the day ...

Another edited version. I hope it an improvement. Thank both of you for your advice. I used as much of it as I could. _____________ January 21st was the day ...

I've now seen first hand about the advice you gave me. I understand more about the things you said. I lov ethe emotion you've got into the piece and how ...

I love the third picture. How the clearness of the bird contrasts against the blurred background. It look to be watching something and the stillness of it is capture in ...

She look to have such a calm nature. Like nothing phases her. I love cats like the. I love the compostition of the photos where you can only see part ...

January 21st was the day you changed my life without even realising. The sun was shining. I recognized you from somewhere, I had no idea where. I knew that sheepish ...

Thanks for that. It's to first thing I've ever wrote properly and went in blind. I'll definatly take on board your advice. It's very good. I do see now how ...