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Hey thanks for pointing that out. Also, love the fact you think it's a bit creepy. :)

I absolutly loved this, it seemed so real to me. I could just feel the mood changing, kind of like summer to winter. I just saw one thing that seemed ...

Hello! Like creativityrules said, this is all just my personal opinion so you don't have to listen (I realized that you couldn't listen anyway, you can only see/read..), or think ...

Why am I such an idiot? I thought to myself, following the voice of my mother through the dark. I wanted to run, but I was dragged in zig zags, ...

Yay! I'm finally reading more! Don't say that they're only eating because this chapter (in my mind) could be thought of as a door opening, leading to a bunch of ...

Hello! I'd just like to say this is really exciting and fast paced, which is awesome. But I feel like even though it is Damon's point of view, it's being ...

This made me think. Maybe I was thinking about buisness men dancing, and for some some reason I pictured their ties having a design of a person on them, but ...

I liked this poem a lot. In the beginning it was kind of hard to see where you were going with it, but but by the end it was all ...

1,2,3,4,5. 1,2,3,4,5. I counted repeatedly the small, delicate purple petals of the Geranium flowers blooming seemingly everywhere. I was studying the tiny veins in the petals so intently I didn't ...

I really liked this, it was filled with mystery and adventure! The story was fast paced and descriptive, like the other commentor said. I also liked that it wasn't too ...

I'm really loving the story! I mean, it's great and I really love it, but you're only on chapter nine yet so many things have happened and honestly I think ...

This poem was really good! I love watermelon, with or without salt. I could see the double meanings in it, and I think that's clever how you fit it in ...

I really liked the message this gave of hope and making it through tough times, and the rhyming was nice too. But one stanza didn't make much sense and a ...

I enjoyed reading this, I think that it's very emotional, and as said before, raw. But I didn't get a clear idea of who "she" was and why she drove ...

I liked this, I could sense a rhythem to it. I liked the theme but I think the last two stanzas were a bit off-topic. And the last line had ...