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Re: Out with the old..
Hello to you to! Nice to see another crazy around here. :D Also, I recognized which language each hello thing was for except ciao. Which language is that? ( I ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Pieces Prologue
This is very intriguing, though honestly there's not much to review here. I mean, you're talented at saying what you have to say in a few sentences but I didn't ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Pieces Prologue
This is very intriguing, though honestly there's not much to review here. I mean, you're talented at saying what you have to say in a few sentences but I didn't ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: You Can Call Me Sam, Chapter 3
Hello! Okay, so I don't think that anything you post will be in need of much critique, you're are that awesome of a writer. I really only have one thing. ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: You Can Call Me Sam, Chapter 2
Hello, Picklesole here! Okay, so I also love this as much as the first chapter. And like I said in the last review, I recommend italicizing Sam's thoughts. I think ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: You Can Call Me Sam, Chapter 1
Hello! I thought this was amazing. I mean, I don't usually read things that are so much like real life, but the way you write just made me read more! ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: A Rose's Bloody Kiss- ch. 1
Hey! I think this is awesome. It has a sweet mood, even though he and Rose are dead in a sense. I'm ninety-nine percent sure that the narrator is a ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Holding Up
Thanks for the review. I wrote this with half awake so I feel stupid missing a bunch of those things. Anyway, she's coughing up the blood and I know I ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: Holding Up
I look upon the gravestone, and I sit 6 feet above my family, each given their own cobalt stone with their own name engraved in it. Twelve gravestones total, and ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: The Eyes That Forgive
Hey Uni! I would like to say well done. Very well done. I truly think I'll have a nightmare about this, which for you is good because that's just what ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: they sang me to sleep
Hey there.I thought this was really sweet in a sad and slightly depressing kind of way. I just noticed a couple things I dreamt of them again last night. They ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Bones that Speak
This is really well written, and a LOT of big words in it. I think it describes most of Bones well and in the very end I think you could ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Bones that Speak
This is really well written, and a LOT of big words in it. I think it describes most of Bones well and in the very end I think you could ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: The (Really) Rough Road to Independence
Once the fighting had officially begun in April of 1776 at Lexington and Concord, life for colonists were bumpy ones. But during the 14 months leading to an official declaration ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: The Doll
This is great. I think it's nice that Copper is so firm in her independence that she would go as far as barfing on her expensive doll and naming it ...
Oct 5, 2011
